How’s it going? 
 
Many of us use criticism as a blues exercise  
for putting up a wall of calm pillow talk.. impressionnant —  
 
Your breathing is still liberal, capacious, even breathtaking...   
 
It’s impolitic to separate performance from text; both are  
in abstraction. Have you thought of writing? 
 
It’s still ultra blurry and anamorphic.  
You got a point.  
Any form you assemble in is about momentary ooomphs we’d overlook otherwise. No proof required, especially. A range of conversation impressed into uncluttered opinion, dedicated sentences. 
 
Flamey asides.  
Wake up and work.