Wednesday, April 12, 2017

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A good number demonstrate the expiry date.
A few of us, let’s put it superbly, are incredulous top
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To continue —

orphans are 1) bad syllable breaks — there should be no syllable breaks! 2) bad line breaks — just 1 or 2 short words on next line; 3) bad page breaks — just 3 or 4 lines on 2nd page. . BAD.

You’re a world-famous trance inducer. That’s it.
Montana homeland defense initiatives; ever higher heels; hideous poems. Bankrolled genocide; hideous poems.

P 30, missing italics.